First off, great job on the action as Juniper lands and it transitions into story development – quite powerfully. Timmantha's intense reaction finding herself so close to Juniper is fantastic; her breakdown plays out perfectly for having just been raped by those she more-or-less trusted. The pain, the shock and the shame are too much, and you portrayed it perfectly. I also love how Juniper's look of surprise turns sadness as she's suddenly helpless to protect Timmantha from the terrible memories

Poor Timmantha! There is a powerful story going on with all the cute little lolis. She's in denial, and poor Juniper can't comfort her. Don't know what I like more: The girls (love the bare feet, as you know) or the storyline.