Tea With Jo *with final page 12* 07/30/07

[Guest]

hope to see more pages awesome work tho

[Guest]

We are mental, we artist....It comes with the gift.

I am going to see if I can continue this Story/comic, but I may switch to black and white. If everyone would like me, too.

Is Jo Bi or Straight?

PBH

Straight, with Sarina, Her and Jim's Neighbor being the only girl that's really made it past Jo's straightness

Jim

Well, I waiting on Jim's approval for page 5. It is done, well almost I have to add some shading and an AI character I have. This is only page I think Jo will be in a compromising position, that I planned. And new characters will coming soon. not next page or page 6 but soon.

PBH

[Guest]

PAGE 5

Okay, I seem to be getting better at this... The script is ...., but I can't reword any better. it is a rough spot so I move on.

Nanna Blossom is an AI Interactive personal interface Prof Bambi can access the rest of her home automated controls and features. Why is her a authoritative Nanny?

On to the showers
PBH

[Guest]

Yea I post page 6

I know I know I miss a week.

I will post two page next week....

[Nafruf]

hehe, this is turning into quite the little series

[Guest]

I know this is nitpicking but the word you are looking for in the panel is Monsoon not as you have it Mansoon. Drawing beautiful proof reader required post haste. Lovely stuff anyhow.

[V.Kyrie]

Nono, 'mansoon' sounds much more appealing.: 3

*hums a few bars of "Its Raining Man"* ; 3
~V.Kyrie (:*

[Guest]

I got hang up more on Saunu
It is supposed to be sauna i hope (finnish name for it).
Or as we call it a Bastu

[Guest]

Okay Page 7


I been having RL issue in the way of This JO. but I have not for gotten you. But I have Pages 8, 9, and 10 Drawn, I have to just ink them and Script... It is always the script that slow this down... ANd yes I am not happy about Page 7. It is not as good as the rest... But the show must go on.... Saturday or Sunday next update

PBH

Edit: Grrrr Grammer errors boy do I need a editor...

[Nafruf]

nice pun maybe the quality is a little less but hey, its still ok

[Guest]

Page 8

And New Characters

Edit: Man I wish someone said some about the grammer errors..

Text repair and improved

[Guest]

Uh oh whats going to happen next??
Heh.Can't wait to see.
-Jo

[Guest]

Page #9

I have one more maybe two... But I am not sure where to take this after page 10....

Edit: storyline changing and page 9 will be reposted after rewrite, redraw and approval by Jo.


PBH

[V.Kyrie]

Hmm.. Jo's not going to be getting any from the guys is she? Just curious since she's a one trick pony. ; )
(That trick being Cheetah, lol).

~V.Kyrie (:*


ps: As an after thgouht i'm not even sure if I used or abused that term right... so lemme know, anyone?

[Guest]

Draw this cartoon more sexy . If you can , continue that cartoon